The Rake

Red John

04 The Rake

The first night it only stood in the doorway.

Claire woke because the air in the room had changed. The fan still turned. The streetlight still painted the same thin line across the ceiling. Nothing else moved. She kept her eyes half-closed and listened. Breathing that was not hers came from the hall—slow, wet at the edges, close enough that she could hear the pause between each inhale. She did not turn her head. She counted to sixty. On sixty-one the breathing stopped. When she finally looked, the doorway was empty. The carpet in the hall showed two long, damp prints that ended at the threshold and did not continue.

She told herself it was the neighbor’s dog. She told herself the prints were from her own bare feet. She changed the sheets anyway and slept with the lamp on.

The second night it came closer.

She woke with her face turned toward the wall. Something stood between the bed and the dresser. She could see the shape in the mirror above the dresser: pale, too tall for the room, shoulders narrow, arms hanging so the hands nearly brushed the floor. The fingers were long. They flexed once, slow, like they were testing the air. Claire’s throat locked. She tried to pull the blanket higher and found her arms would not move. The thing in the mirror tilted its head. Its eyes caught the streetlight and held it. It did not blink. It only watched her reflection the way a person watches a clock, waiting for the next number to change.

A car passed outside. Headlights swept the wall. When the light faded the mirror showed only the dresser and the empty stretch of carpet. Claire’s arms worked again. She sat up so fast the blanket slid to the floor. The room smelled like cold dirt and something sweet that had started to turn. She stayed awake until morning with her back against the headboard and the lamp between her knees.

On the third night she did not sleep at all.

She sat in the chair by the window with every light in the apartment on. The hallway door stood open because closing it felt worse. At 2:17 the temperature dropped. Her breath fogged. From the dark beyond the doorway came the soft drag of something being pulled across carpet—skin, not cloth. The sound stopped just inside the room. Claire did not look directly at it. She watched the reflection in the dark television screen instead. The shape was there: naked, colorless, joints bent the wrong way so it could fold itself smaller than it should have been. It crouched at the foot of the chair. One long hand rested on the armrest, inches from her wrist. The fingers tapped once. The nail clicked against the wood.

“Claire,” it said. The voice was small and close to her ear, though the mouth in the television did not move. “You keep leaving the lights on.”

She closed her eyes. When she opened them the hand was gone. The television showed only the room. A single clear handprint remained on the armrest, longer than hers, the fingertips pressed so hard the wood had dented.

She left the apartment at dawn. She drove to her sister’s house two towns over and slept on the couch with the television running. For three nights nothing happened. On the fourth night she woke because something was breathing against the back of her neck. The couch faced the wall. She could not turn. A hand—cold, damp, fingers too many—settled on her shoulder and stayed there, patient, while the breathing continued. Her sister’s dog growled once from the hallway and then went silent. The hand squeezed, gentle, like a reminder.

“You moved,” the voice said. It sounded pleased. “That is fine. I know the way.”

In the morning the dog would not enter the living room. Claire found four long scratches in the paint beside the couch, running from the baseboard up to the height of her shoulder. She did not pack a bag. She drove until the gas light came on, checked into a motel that took cash, and sat on the edge of the bed with the lights on and the curtains open. At 3:04 the ice machine in the hall kicked on. Under the noise she heard the same slow drag of skin on carpet, closer than the machine, stopping just outside her door. The handle turned once, testing. It did not open. Something leaned against the other side of the door and stayed there. She could hear it breathing through the thin wood. She could hear it smile.

Claire did not sleep. She watched the gap under the door. A shadow crossed it, long and low, and did not move again until the sun rose and the ice machine finally shut off. When she opened the door the hallway was empty. On the carpet directly outside lay a single pale hair, longer than her forearm, curled like it had been pulled free and left on purpose.

She understood then that the lights had never mattered. The distance had never mattered. It had only been waiting for her to stop running long enough to learn the new room. She closed the door, sat back on the bed, and turned off the lamp. In the dark she listened to the breathing start again, closer this time, already inside.